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I think you have a little too much content there! Clients generally don't want to know your life story; they simply want to know what you can do for them. Some small tips: keep text to a minimum; more visuals besides your portfolio images (a picture of yourself is a good place to start); bold out keywords -- works for both SEO and reader scan-ability

Check out the portfolio of Richard Milne (a good example - [link] ) or even my own mini portfolio ( [link] )

Hope this helps you